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Waiting for a new game from you, this time focus on ads and getting more players. Your style is good so next time try a bit modern or complete lewd medieval stuff

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HEY DEV

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What's up?

Will Francis get justice?

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It depends on which route you take

Sam should get punished also Derrick

hello

Hey yo

New look damn

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what are all recipe reactions and effects?

hey soldier

New universe opening where Francis beats Derricks ass hehe stay tuned playas

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;)

Ahh finally you responded, tried to reach you on twitter

But that game I never released 

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TWO WORLDS INSIDE ONE

Hey it's me the same guy who wrote so many posts about Samantha and derrick affair.  I am really disturbed , I regret playing this maybe it's because of my soft heart haha. I am an infidelity victim so anything related with cheating triggers the hell out of me. I really liked the game and it's set up but the only thing that made me uncomfortable is the affair of Samantha. I came here  10 months ago suffered through the same pain, now here I am again

A FINAL REPORT

I have some assumptions about Francis and Samantha relationship. I think they married because of their family, something like family contract, the medieval marriage.  Also there is a chance for love marriage too. Let's go a bit deeper into the scenario. Francis and Samantha got married and started to live their married life. From what we know from the game soon their married started to go downhill. The dev didn't gave us a clear and detailed reason. let's assume it's because of Francis's small penis(The game leaves some clues related to this). And Samantha has a high sex drive that is not satisfiable by Francis just through regular vanilla sex

Then comes an important question how Derrick got into this, how he managed to make Samantha spread her legs for him. What I believe is he first approached her as a broken man who lost his wife or he just shoot his shot on Samantha who was having trouble with her husbands small penis and lack of hard sex. Soon they developed a bond but I wonder was a it a romantic one or just for sex one(For the kink). Maybe this new affair gave her hard enjoyable sex which was only a dream for her. Derrick has nothing to loose so he is really enjoying what he got

But there is this one thing that really messing with my mind it's this dialogue "From the hungry look in Francis, you don't think he's had a woman in a long time". Francis never had sex in a long time! and he is hungry for sex while he has sex bomb shell of a wife in home. Something is off here Samantha has a different reason for her infidelity or are they both have the same infidelity kink. But Francis was never shown as a bad or evil guy. After the Maya's first sexual encounter with Francis he goes to Maya's house one more time in the night to get  sexual pleasure. This tells us that Francis also has a pervy side and he really like sex. So a perverted Francis and sex hungry Samantha must be the best combination. Still something is off

Derrick's relationship with Samantha contains so many risks. In the future events we can see Derrick turns into evil guy who molest Maya and her friend. Derrick has no moral values nor sympathy so this points out a fact that Samantha doesn't know that a small mistake from her can end her own life. Derrick and Samantha goes to the woods in unusual times, they only want the sex and they don't do it in Derricks place so it points out they are careful about what they do. 

Rumors are everywhere and most of the people in that town knows about it too, but no one have the guts to tell about this to Francis maybe it's because of Derrick being and evil person. Also some narrations shown in the game tells Francis would never confront Derrick because that would be dangerous. What Derrick have to say to justify his action from the infidelity to the confrontation(if happens). I got a thing to say first of all it's only my imagination. What if all this has dark past, like before the death of Derricks wife

Part 2 will be uploaded soon

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A husband who can't even confront his wife's affair partner beacuse the affair partner is ready to kill anyone who questions him. Only a mentally fucked up can create something like this 

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Derrick is the one who started it i think, he is the abusive alpha male. Samantha has a high sex drive and when derrick tried to hit on her she fell for it. Also she is an unfaithful narcissist. Now the problem is derrick is single so he wants samantha. Francis is in danger if he confronts derrick he is dead. And samantha will show no emotions or feelings for francis. But after revealing it to francis you can't find samantha in the woods so things maybe cool or they started to meet somewhere else. Dev could have show some mercy towards francis or teach derrick a lesson

samantha is dead. derrick milton killed her

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how do i get maggie breast to grow?

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"BUT YOU KNOW DERRICK CAN TAKE CARE OF HIMSELF"


Does this leads to point where derrick is even ready to attack francis if he confronts derrick about the cheating. But how derrick can defend against a sin or crime the actions derrick did was not good or glory it was like stealing someone's special meal and fighting him for fun

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When you say about samantha's cheating to francis the protagonist say's in mind "any open confrontation with the blury tavern owner wouldn't be in francis' best interests". Does this leads to derrick being a bully bull in francis-samantha relationship. One thing that we all avoid is the narrations about francis-samantha relationship, burla say's francis isn't enough to satisfy the high sex drive of samantha but on a diffrent ocassion you can hear ''rumor has it that the marriage dosen't do much for either francis or his wife samantha''. Does this means francis also needs some fun in life but samantha isn't giving it or the opposite.


but after all these you can't find them in the woods does this leads to point where francis talked about this to samantha

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THE POTTER ISSUE


I know this comment section is dead  but i like to share some thoughts on the infidelity of samantha

We all have seen that samantha the wife of francis potter cheats on him with derrick. It is not that easy to read for a person who hates the idea of cheating so let me share some things that i think are really important in this work

The dev used a clear and huge narration to explain the act but what i think is the way the dev introduced that situation holds a diffrent purpose in game. It is for humiliating francis we all know francis is a short guy and we can see derrick millton is shown as a big guy in the sexual scene so it is for creating a competition aspect between francis and derrick but unfortunately francis fails

second instead of just letting as see it the dev allows us to share it with francis(if we choose) or let francis get some pleassure from the protagonist and one important thing is that  after sharing it with francis and burla gossip about this then you can't find samantha in the act again so the dev showed some mercy towards francis(who knows if the dev never planned anything with samantha). then we can witness people saying samantha is not so happy with francis but still samantha did a bad thing


One more thing even if this game has a massive open world  still you can't meet samantha so it leads to a point where samantha dosen't hold any big value in game she was just for humiliating francis and showing derricks love towards hard sexual activities

hope the dev adds a little revenge scene of francis

What happens if you reveals the cheating of samantha to francis?

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I like the concepts of the game. Corrupting the town is fun and I enjoyed figuring out the potions and ingredients. 

But the tavern storyline is downright disturbing. Both the main character and Maggie are sexually harassed and assaulted, but that's not what I have an issue with. I'm not squeamish about themes of sexual assault. Even Derick the seemingly good tavern owner revealing himself to be a piece of shit by condoning the harassment and assault and blaming the women when they stand up for themselves is realistic, especially for the time period. 

What's disturbing is that the writer treats it as if all women secretly want to be assaulted. Both the main character and Maggie begin enjoying the abuse. The main character even has a thought along the lines of "I guess all women have a naughty streak". Wanting to be harassed and molested by strangers is not a "naughty streak" and is definitely not something all women have.

so samantha is in danger

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I apologize if those scenes made you uncomfortable. I would like to reiterate that this game is not intended to be a depiction of reality (in any time period). The content of the game reflects fantasies, and in that instance, fantasies which I (a woman) enjoy but would not want to occur in real life. As such, the dialogue reflects certain kinks.

The entire premise of drugging people against their will or knowledge is reprehensible outside the realm of imagination. That being said, this game is a product of financial pressures which pushed me to make some additions which I personally do not find appealing, and so if I ever do return to regular development, I will take your concerns into consideration when editing existing dialogue.

oh you replied

no no don't rewrite

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But some people link fiction with reality. I still can't accept you made samantha a whore and poor francis a cuckold. And everybody in town knows about the horrible cheating and no one talks about it to francis. And in this massive open world you can't meet samantha, is she dead?. Kinks are great but they are not serving justice to the game mechanism. Francis didn't do anything wrong he was a normal guy and samantha cheating on him with abusive piece of shit derrick. sure she will get killed if she change her mind.


The dev did a nice work making a good open world text based game but the dev only used the kinky side of the brain. Through one option you can inform francis about the cheating, still we can see narations about francis is afraid of derrick. Burla knows stuff and she gossip but still there is no event about samantha in future. i'm a twine dev too, i too made a game like this. In my game i gave the victim a chance to get revenge by sleeping with the evil affair partners daughter. Derrick is a opportunist and samanthas high sex drive dosen't serve any purpose in the cheating because francis is a lil perv too. you clearly let us see that francis has a perv side. Magic exist so penis enlargment exist to why don't serve some justice to francis


Overall the game is good, sorry if i was mean to you dev. i'm a infidelity victim thats my problem. Hope you serve justice to francis in the future

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So this is dead, then? Shame. I had high hopes for it.

yeah hope the dev make a comeback

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Clicking Download Now just loads the game in my browser on Firefox, instead of actually downloading the game.

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how do i get maggie's chest to grow

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Oh, new updates but I don't see any changelogs.

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Hiya! This game feels great so far! I'm really enjoying myself on ver. 0.07. I've done a few quests so far that has allowed me to prgoress somewhat through the game, and I've notcied some bugs. If you corrupt Brendan completely before you get Maggie to Level 4, you get soft locked from Maggie's progression to higher levels of corruption, and also for some reason my game locked out an option of me having a potion with Cade.

How do i get past maggie corruption level 4

Is the game still in dev?

Half the text is outside the right edge of the game's area.

How do I even get Maggie to advance from level 4? I tried everything.

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I'd love to know how to get the relationship points up with Blake or corruption points.

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I think we would need something like a hint section of the game in order to have us less guess work on quests.

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I get this error in red after walking through the town:



"Nonsense. You're here for the rumors, I know it." Brula interrupts. You have to admit that you are curious about what's going on in town. "Have you ever heard about the hermit who lives in the woods?"

Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: State.variables.hasVisited is not a function

"I'll see you later, Brula." You say, heading back home.

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Me, too. There's also this kind of error on another event if the potion you spiked didn't work. 

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I liked this! Though, I may have to wait a bit more to have some bugs fixed and probably some hints available when trying to obtain new ingredients or on how it works.

Also, is corruption the only way to progress or if it's an alternate route?

I can't get Maggie past level 4 pls help

Did you figure it out?

hey, i was wondering if there's any pregnancy or futa content? i haven't gotten all that far into the game to be honest so for all i know these things could already be added, but i was curious anyway

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Hey glad you tried the game, there is currently some pseudo-futa content, but no pregnancy. These are both things I would like to add more of, but the game is also currently on hold due to IRL things taking up most of my time.

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that's fine, thanks for replying. hope things go well.

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I think I've hit the content wall on everything I'm going to do in v0.06 except maybe corrupting Reya (she's at level 4 now and takes forever to level up since all the scenes I've seen with her only give 10 or 15xp).

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  • Did Maggie's content to level 6 post wedding
  • Leah's content to the Oil/ venom/ Marest Vine potion
  • Kelric's content to the farthest Searching for a Source goes this build
  • Jess and Harlan's content to the second dose of potion
  • Christian and Cade's content to telling Christian to confess to Cade
  • Derrick's content to post wedding (and Brendon's)
  • Reya to level 4 (putting her on hold until there are scenes that give more 10/15px for her)
  • Bought oil from and walked with Marius several times

Not going to really bother with Blake or Ben and Harris for now

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How did ypu get past maggie level 4 corruption?

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Just noticed that The Haunted Hospital is still in my quest log even though I met the ghost (avoiding details because spoilers) and hit the content wall on Searching for a Source already. I'm assuming that I've also hit Leah's content wall since I can't do anything but take her back to the hut for a date. Just finished the wedding and have Submissive Reya  level 3.  (v0.06)

Don't know if the early access build handles it, but it would be nice if the journal updated when you discover new ingredients and their effects.

Just noticed that trying to read Maggie's info under "characters" gives Leah's instead (version 0.06)

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What does Marest Vine actually do? I've got 4 of them and they don't seem to have any effect combined with the ingredients and base I have (water, chamomile, ginseng, Lekkaroot, hornet venom, anima flower, and mesmer pollen)

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Thanks for the feedback, I'm aware of that bug and It will be fixed in the next update. As for Marest Vine, it has no effect when consumed, but if you combine it with oil then it has greater effects. The quest to obtain oil begins after talking to Reya about the oil used early on in her progression. I am also working on making the journal more dynamic over time, as well as more accessible as a reference. Thanks for playing!

got it, I'm currently going through Leah's progression until I reach a content wall, so it'll be a while before I get the oil

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